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The Proposal By Frederic Colier

 

KATE, a smart corporate woman in her early thirties.

JUSTIN, a mystery writer in his mid-thirties.

 

A resort cabin near a remote coast. It is a cabin such as the ones rented for weekend escapes, comfortable but not lavish.

There is a bed on the right. A painting hangs above the bedstead. The painting is the portrait of a young woman dressed in white dress. A garment box with a red silk ribbon lies on the top of the bed.

Next to the bed, a small table with an empty champagne bucket.  Upstage, to the left, a door opens to the bathroom. The front door is on the left. Between the two doors, a small desk and a chair. There is a jacket over the chair. A small wooden chest against a wall.

      Justin Breedlove sits at the desk, engrossed in the story he is writing. He is enthusiastic, bobbing his head up and down as ideas flash through his mind.  He puts his pen down, sits back, and seizes the sheets of paper.  He gets up from his chair and reads out loud.

 

 JUSTIN

   (Reading) - His mind would not rest in peace, as if the most haunting fever had settled in his heart. "She" occupied every minute of his life . . .

  (He walks past the painting.)

  Hey Beautiful.

  And the little boat steered towards the lighthouse.  In front of him, a wall of edged rocks, sharper than a razor's blade . . .

  Yeah! Yeah!

  The night was thick and dark. But, from the distance, the comfort of the light made him forget the danger.

  I love it. I love it. I love it. Love it.

  Strange, he thought, yesterday I was lost in a desert, searching for an oasis that had disappeared from the map . . .

  It's coming back. It's coming back!

  (Singing)

  Water of love deep, deep, deep in the ground.

  (JUSTIN rushes back to the desk. He scrapes something off the page and writes something else. He resumes the reading.)

  The lighthouse's light flashed in the distance. The waves assaulted the rocks as the little dinghy hit a well of fury.  Time to rescue her had arrived.

   I'm back in the game. I’m back! Back! Back! Back! Back!

(He punches an invisible target.)

  Oh brother, what a day!

(As he paces the room, he notices the boxes on the bed. He checks his watch, ponders, seizes the garment box, and flings it under the bed. He lies on top of the bed)

  What a story!  What a story!

 (He blows the portrait kisses.  There is a soft knock on the front door. JUSTIN checks his watch, scans the room rapidly. He straightens the bedspread, pushes the box under the bed with the tip of his foot, then rushes to open the door.

KATE stands at the door, carrying a small suitcase. She looks dejected.)

 

Right on time, as always. I thought you’d get lost on the way. I’m impressed.

 

(He wants to take the suitcase away from her, but, after a brief unemotional hug, she heads straight to the bed where she throws her suitcase. She inspects the room.)

 

Something wrong, honey?

 

kate

 

No, nothing . . . Just the drive . . .

 (She sits on the bed.)

 

gave me a headache.

(She opens her suitcase, grabs a pill.)

 

justin

 

Alone, this drive can be a drag.

 

kate

 

 Alone? … Yes, I suppose.

 

justin

 

It does get pretty windy at times, but the scenery is really breathtaking. Did you see the size of that lighthouse?

 

kate

 

Lighthouse?

 

justin

 

How could you miss it? It’s the biggest one on the coast.

 

kate

 

I felt nauseous the whole way down.

 

justin

 

Is there something wrong?

 

kate

 

It’s nothing.

 

justin

 

You’re a terrible liar, you know. In fact, you’re the worst liar I’ve ever met.

 

kate

 

Something very disturbing just happened.

 

justin

 

I knew it . . . So?

 

kate

 

Not now.

 

justin

 

Please?

 

kate

 

 I'm tired. I’m going to take a shower. I'll feel better afterwards.

 

justin

 

(Gets near her.)

 

No, no, no no no. Not now. Just because you don’t want to talk to me doesn’t mean that I don’t have something to tell you . . .

 

(She looks around.)

 

 What's the matter, honey?

 

kate

 

Don't you think this place is a rather strange choice for a romantic weekend? . . . It’s kind of spooky.

 

 

justin

(He surveys the room.)

 

What do you mean?

 

kate

 

There’s something weird about it.

 

justin

 

 (Looks around)

 

 It’s nice and warm and . . . very quiet. It’s unlike you to be so bothered by things.  This drive’s got the best of you. You should have come down with me.

 

(Kate looks about the room.)

  A good night sleep and you’ll feel different.

 

(He waits for her to look at him.)

  So are you interested in what I have to say, or shall we let what’s bothering you spoil the whole evening?

 

KATE

 

Just give me time to arrive. A minute.

 

justin

 

All right, why don’t you just tell me what happened? You’re driving me insane.

 

kate

 

I’ve had a terrible day at work.

(Justin looks at her askance.)

 

I . . .

 

justin

 

You?

 

kate

 

I stopped in town to get some gas.

 

justin

 

 That’s frightening.

 

kate

 

I’ve always been there for you when you needed someone to vent your frustrations to.

 

justin

 

Okay, I’m sorry. I’m sorry.

 

kate

 

I overheard this old man talking . . . about this weird story. I don’t know why but it really scared me.

 

justin

 

You shouldn’t pay attention. People around here don’t like tourists. They would say anything to scare you.

 

kate

 

And the drive was so . . . so sinister. These small roads, in the middle of nowhere . . . As if you drive on and on and never get anywhere.

 

justin

 

My god, they did scare you.

 

kate

 

Outside the station, this old man was telling this grim story. He was sitting on a bench, talking to a young man from out of town.

 

JUSTIN

 

How do you know he was from out-of-town?

 

kate

 

He was too nicely dressed for being from around here. The old man told him to get the hell out of town, at once. The young man smiled and asked him why. So the old man asked him if he had heard about “The Pale Maiden.”

 

justin

 

That would make a great title for a novel.

 

kate

 

Apparently, at this time of the year, she seduces and kills a young man in the county.

 

justin

 

Is this why you find this place spooky?

 

 (He hugs her.)

 

 This is non-sense. I’ve never even heard about this maiden, and I’ve known people who’ve been coming around here for years.

 

kate

 

She was a beautiful young woman. One day, a young man passed through town. It was love at first sight and he proposed to her. They left together. But they had barely reached the coast when he grew impatient. He demanded to consummate their love before getting married. She refused. So he raped her and strangled her. But before dying, she grabbed his knife stabbed him, and disappeared. And for the last one hundred years, more than thirty young men, all travelers, have been found stabbed to death—without an explanation.

 

justin

 

I didn’t know you to be such a good storyteller. Very convincing. This old man’s got a fertile imagination . . . Did he run away?  . . . The “nicely dressed young man.”

 

kate

 

No, but he was frightened. I could tell in his eyes.

 

justin

 

He probably was afraid that the fog would swallow him alive . . . 

(Kate closes her suitcase.)

 

We’ll find out tomorrow if he makes the headlines.

 

KATE

 

We should go.

 

JUSTIN

 

You’ve just arrived. There’s not an ounce of truth to this story. We’re going to have a good time.

 

kate

 

I don't like this place.

 

justin

 

It’s unlike you to be so gullible. You’re in such a state.

 

kate

 

You should have seen the look the old man gave me . He had small blue piercing eyes and they grinned at me . . . It was as if he was trying to curse me. I get shivers just thinking about it.

(Pause.)

 

justin

 

Nothing’s going to happen.

 

(Kate acts scared.)

 

Okay, maybe a drink will cheer you up.

 

kate

 

I’ve got a splitting headache.

 

justin

 

Just a small one.

 

kate

 

Not for me. Not now.

 

justin

 

I’ve got something else that may help.

 

kate

 

Why don't we go somewhere else?

   

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